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Phailin
by Annie Thakur



Cyclones twirling & hurling all night,
Winds pounding with all their might.
It’s definitely as big as a hurricane
And it floods the area with a lot of rain. 
 
Since cyclones are so much big
If you ever had one......
I wonder how much damage it did.
 
This was one of Nature’s furies,
And we were worried in case it hit Puri.
Because that is where my grandparents live.
 
But soon the cyclone was all gone,
Leaving behind a trail of destruction done.

7-Nov-2013
 
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You are one of my favourites young Artist , keep going you are fantastic !!
Alexandra Monteakegre
Nov-10-2014
Well done Annie. Keep it up! Good rhyming.

Well Done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Brother)
Aditya
Nov-16-2013
Spontaneous writing. I appreciate your efforts. You appear to be a promising writer. Very well done.

-Rita Ray-
Rita Ray
Nov-11-2013
Brilliant Annie.
Well done. Eagerly waiting for your next one.
(Dad)
Anupam Thakur
Nov-11-2013
Ver good poem. We liked it.
Shib Shankar Ray
Nov-09-2013
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